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Ok dograd was good but Mike, the first rule of improv is you actually have to be a funny person and an entertaining person and you're none of those things so i'm not sure why you decided to be the other part of the improv. The whole plot about "who's the bigger tobuscus fan" is dumb especially since it didn't lead up to anything. Dograd said what is tobuscus' catchphrase and that's it there was nothing else. Hell there was no outro or anything so it feels like the improv had more to it but you cut it out to get the cartoon out faster. You've said to me countless amounts of times that you think outros and credits only ruin the cartoon but no it makes the cartoon actually feel complete. Outros are supposed to be the thing that tells you "ok the cartoon is actually over now" but for some reason you hate credits and outros (and even intros which makes even less sense) so if anything, the lack of credits ruins the cartoon not credits in general. The animation and character designs are the usual bland style you have. These look like they were scrapped character designs for The Drool except with solid colors instead of textures. Also weird inconsistent line work for some reason? The lines on the lip sync are terrible, but your lines have always been bad so whatever. Random question but why did you bother getting someone else to do the audio if they weren't gonna add anything to it? Literally the improv is there and no background music or sound effects or anything, and hell the improv sounded bad too, in the first 5 seconds you two start laughing what the fuck that's not how improv or audio editing works do better. But hey Miles did a good job on the colors so that's one good thing

But hey i'm just a big cyberbully so what do i know...

foneycone responds:

While you have valid points, a lot of your critiques apply to your own work. The plot is there is no plot, it's improv, we just rolled with it. I'll agree it ended abruptly and I'll fix that in the future. Call my style bland, but at least I put effort into it rather that make it sloppy and brush it over as a creative choice. Also the lines can't be consistent if there are none. I didn't get anyone to do the audio for the cartoon, I edited it myself, so don't know where ya got that from. Laughing in imrov is also okay, as most improvs feature laughter and shows the people are having a good time and gives it a more natural feel. Didn't call you a cyber bully, so yeah. If you didn't enjoy the cartoon that's fine, but I find it ironic how you complained about some ratings I gave to dumb boring nothing improvs yet you gave this a one star review which was honestly too low of a rating for something like this. Much of this applies to your own boring improv, so fix your own stuff before you write a wall of text criticizing mine. But thanks for the criticism anyways.

the animation is bad and its called "pokemon no"

make leo and satan

I didn't know you were on Newgrounds! Love the art and animation in this

you suck gerardo!!! go die@@@@!!

Really like your art/animation style dude, you did a real good job with this

The colors were ok and the characters were sort of expressive with nice poses? Other than that there's nothing else here that stands out or makes the cartoon a good one

I've always hated your stuff it never looks good but dude this is way worse than your other stuff

I really like this art style, bu the animation was a little choppy at times. The voice acting and backgrounds were really neat too. Nice job

Jesus man i love everything about your cartoons
The animation, backgrounds, character design, voices, colors, all of that.
Nice work on this boy, i really hope you continue to do more stuff with frumplequest

i post art on here just so they can be seen in their highest quality. i don't like this place and otherwise want nothing to do with it. good day sir or ma'am

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