Ok dograd was good but Mike, the first rule of improv is you actually have to be a funny person and an entertaining person and you're none of those things so i'm not sure why you decided to be the other part of the improv. The whole plot about "who's the bigger tobuscus fan" is dumb especially since it didn't lead up to anything. Dograd said what is tobuscus' catchphrase and that's it there was nothing else. Hell there was no outro or anything so it feels like the improv had more to it but you cut it out to get the cartoon out faster. You've said to me countless amounts of times that you think outros and credits only ruin the cartoon but no it makes the cartoon actually feel complete. Outros are supposed to be the thing that tells you "ok the cartoon is actually over now" but for some reason you hate credits and outros (and even intros which makes even less sense) so if anything, the lack of credits ruins the cartoon not credits in general. The animation and character designs are the usual bland style you have. These look like they were scrapped character designs for The Drool except with solid colors instead of textures. Also weird inconsistent line work for some reason? The lines on the lip sync are terrible, but your lines have always been bad so whatever. Random question but why did you bother getting someone else to do the audio if they weren't gonna add anything to it? Literally the improv is there and no background music or sound effects or anything, and hell the improv sounded bad too, in the first 5 seconds you two start laughing what the fuck that's not how improv or audio editing works do better. But hey Miles did a good job on the colors so that's one good thing
But hey i'm just a big cyberbully so what do i know...