FreezePark's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Roommates - Monster Mini-Mayhem]

Every day i keep getting review notifications on this cartoon that are long 0 star reviews and the next day i check back and the same people have a new one because you or whoever else has been reporting them. You should probably check who that is and remove them from the project or something.

Also i don't think this is very good. First couple times watching it i thought it was a huge improvement for you but honestly the only thing you really improved on since the last roommates episode was just frame by frame. I used to pass off lazy looking art as a style but sometimes it really isn't. Drawing all of the humans the same and then not being able to draw anything else very good isn't a style, it's just not knowing how to draw. The voice acting has always been bad, some aren't good at acting, some are literally just talking into a mic and not actually voice acting, and some have piss poor quality. The story i'm indifferent about, some points are paced fine but i feel like the parts with the worst pacing are the actual important parts, especially when the villain is first revealed (also the villian's body exploding and his brain being put into an animal's body is just ripping off Evil Con Carne except with a dog.) Backgrounds are fine enough and some of the jokes weren't even that bad. I feel the only thing i can really say about this is that you shouldn't work on cartoons 24/7, you should just work on the things that people have been telling you for almost 2 years. Work on art, colors, writing, pacing, characters and voice acting. I can tell you put effort into some of this because you worked on it for a year and kept going even when you were past your 3 deadlines, but still. Also, the roommates intro hurts my ears i would legit prefer Kevin McLeod music or even the shortened version.

I don't even agree with some of the reviews that have been deleted, but like what's the point of uploading to newgrounds if you or whoever is just gonna delete everything that isn't 5 stars?

FlowJoe responds:

<3.

[Blockhead Ben - Pilot]

cole's review is dumb the only thing that may be similar to eddsworld is some of the older art and animation, only thing i don't really like are how some of the jokes are executed and the pacing when they're in the house. but yeah i see more influence from stuff like spongebob (which i already knew that you were heavily inspired by) than eddsworld people jump to that when they see some of the art. also in future shorts make the characters more diverse and make their traits more obvious. still really like the art and animation in the later parts and also the jokes

[Grumpcade Animated - Simpin World]

ive really grown to like ur art style nice job my elk man

SirLenward responds:

love you baby oxoxoxo

[The Crowbrothers-The treasure]

Hellbender

[The Doogal Collab]

you literally stole like 4 jokes

[Weedcario!]

HOW DID THIS GET FRONTPAGED

SirLenward responds:

pokemon + drugs = Frontpaged

[Mario's Star Calamity]

jesus this made me nostalgic for those old sprite series

[The Abysmal Life of Slim Sacrum]

i fucking love you alcoholic elk

SirLenward responds:

Oxoxox

[A Magical Snowman]

seeing alex sarzosas face on a snowman was fucking funny good job

Urbs responds:

thanks dude!

[No Ordanary Day- The Legend of Sock Puppet Paul PREVIEW]

lookin excellent so far my dude