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the punchline of the cartoon is pretty lame but everything else is top notch my GUY

Azoko responds:

top notch toons

animator9 is my inspiration as well

RGPAnims responds:

Deep down, he's an inspiration to all of us.

now i'm gonna have fucking nightmares thanks

Very cool, evaluh's style is great

Avonom responds:

Definitely a unique style too. Thanks for your comments mate!

yeah, this was alright. i personally haven't liked the directions you've been taking your art style in but i can definitley say that each cartoon you've made this year have had improvemets in the art, even if only in small aspects. i really didnt like how the animation was in the last unleashed episode with how the animation is mostly pose to pose and not actual lively and cartoony animation and you sorta got better with that in this cartoon to the point where the animation doesnt look too stiff but its still there. i wish you did more poses that weren't just the characters standing in place and i wish you framed your shots in a more interesting way. everything is either one character towards the left/right side of the screen or the couple of shots where the character is standing and you see his full body from a eye level sort of camera angle. what i'm saying is that a variety of camera angles and poses would make these cartoons way more visually interesting. i have to give you major credit for not making the cartoon too predictable, considering this plot has been done before in a couple other cartoons. the main thing thats been killing your cartoons ever since you started was the voice acting, thomas always sounds like he's obviously just reading his line outloud, the kid who does the timebear always sounds like he's recording his line in a different room as the microphone and i like the fact that you recorded your lines when you were actually sick but everytime your character spoke i wanted him out of the scene as soon as possible because you sounding like you were dying made me want to fucking die. sick and drained out voices talking really close to the microphone while dragging out every single word they say is really annoying but i guess its fitting, so i cant really take off points for that???? another thing, i dont like how fluffy john is sick but he also looks exactly the same as he was when he was perfectly okay in the last episode. look at the suds episode of spongebob, when spongebob got sick his color palette got a whole lot more grey, his eyes got huge with bags under them, and hell towards the end he was literally a huge fucking ball of snot. you could tell he was sick, in this it just seems like fluffy john's really tired or something. i only have 2 other problems with the cartoon and they could easily be fixed and i'm surprised that you havent already done so: for one, actual backgrounds asap. secondly, the lip sync that jaq does is fine enough but i think its pretty lazy that spusky gus's snout NEVER moves with his mouth and also the few shots where spusky's mouth is going off of his body just looks awkward because you dont animate that either. overall, this is pretty okay. i do like some of the poses and some jokes were actually pretty funny, but more variety in pretty much every single department would be lovely.

one of the coolest things ive ever seen and i aint even saying that because i was in it, nice job you crazy kids

the cartoon itself is fine but something you really need to quit doing is that you keep getting the same really good voice actor to play a character but then you'll get a really bad voice actor to play the other character which isn't very smart. was pretty cool to see hitman again after more than a year though

foneycone responds:

Yeah, that's something I've been working on. I reached out to some other guys that are up for it so hopefully it isn't an issue in the future.

you get better and better with each cartoon me man

SirLenward responds:

why thank you oxoxox

you did a better job at making drawings of mine digital than i could so props, hope the film festival works out!!!!!!

i'm disappointed in newgrounds for actually letting this get out of judgement with 3 stars

i post art on here just so they can be seen in their highest quality. i don't like this place and otherwise want nothing to do with it. good day sir or ma'am

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