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[Grumpcade Animated - Simpin World]

ive really grown to like ur art style nice job my elk man

SirLenward responds:

love you baby oxoxoxo

[Weedcario!]

HOW DID THIS GET FRONTPAGED

SirLenward responds:

pokemon + drugs = Frontpaged

[The Abysmal Life of Slim Sacrum]

i fucking love you alcoholic elk

SirLenward responds:

Oxoxox

[A Magical Snowman]

seeing alex sarzosas face on a snowman was fucking funny good job

Urbs responds:

thanks dude!

[Roommates - Zombees]

Ian Egleston aka Freezepark
fuck you

FlowJoe responds:

<3 love you too

[Akko's trip: Little Witch Academia Parody]

It's alright.

Besides the trip out part, there wasn't that much animation. The lip sync looked a little weird and the couple arm movements that was there looked kinda stiff. The trip out part that Moha did looked alright, but it kinda felt out of place. The rest of the cartoon is really quiet with very little background noise but then all of a sudden there's a really loud 5 second portion, maybe that was the point but whatev. The joke of the cartoon was pretty stale too, taking drugs to know something but instead killing people wacky!!!!!!! You should probably start doing original content cos from what ive seen you aren't really that good at doing parodies. But your stuff is starting to look better so thats good

alicemargiela responds:

Thanks, man, but too be honest, i'll never stop making what I like. I like parodies. It's all good to not like my content, but just don't watch it if you don't feel its your cup of tea. Thanks for being honest though. :) #stillimproving

[Roommates - Raccoon Stand]

the art and animation suck and its hard to tell what the joke and setup of the cartoon is because the art and animation suck

Roommates responds:

http://imgur.com/a/R7Mnm

[The Wall Street Boyz]

pretty short but the animation here is really good, nice job boy

urbfilms responds:

Thanks m8

[Moonshine & Brooner]

Ok dograd was good but Mike, the first rule of improv is you actually have to be a funny person and an entertaining person and you're none of those things so i'm not sure why you decided to be the other part of the improv. The whole plot about "who's the bigger tobuscus fan" is dumb especially since it didn't lead up to anything. Dograd said what is tobuscus' catchphrase and that's it there was nothing else. Hell there was no outro or anything so it feels like the improv had more to it but you cut it out to get the cartoon out faster. You've said to me countless amounts of times that you think outros and credits only ruin the cartoon but no it makes the cartoon actually feel complete. Outros are supposed to be the thing that tells you "ok the cartoon is actually over now" but for some reason you hate credits and outros (and even intros which makes even less sense) so if anything, the lack of credits ruins the cartoon not credits in general. The animation and character designs are the usual bland style you have. These look like they were scrapped character designs for The Drool except with solid colors instead of textures. Also weird inconsistent line work for some reason? The lines on the lip sync are terrible, but your lines have always been bad so whatever. Random question but why did you bother getting someone else to do the audio if they weren't gonna add anything to it? Literally the improv is there and no background music or sound effects or anything, and hell the improv sounded bad too, in the first 5 seconds you two start laughing what the fuck that's not how improv or audio editing works do better. But hey Miles did a good job on the colors so that's one good thing

But hey i'm just a big cyberbully so what do i know...

foneycone responds:

While you have valid points, a lot of your critiques apply to your own work. The plot is there is no plot, it's improv, we just rolled with it. I'll agree it ended abruptly and I'll fix that in the future. Call my style bland, but at least I put effort into it rather that make it sloppy and brush it over as a creative choice. Also the lines can't be consistent if there are none. I didn't get anyone to do the audio for the cartoon, I edited it myself, so don't know where ya got that from. Laughing in imrov is also okay, as most improvs feature laughter and shows the people are having a good time and gives it a more natural feel. Didn't call you a cyber bully, so yeah. If you didn't enjoy the cartoon that's fine, but I find it ironic how you complained about some ratings I gave to dumb boring nothing improvs yet you gave this a one star review which was honestly too low of a rating for something like this. Much of this applies to your own boring improv, so fix your own stuff before you write a wall of text criticizing mine. But thanks for the criticism anyways.

[Jerry and Lucky in a saturday morning]

you suck gerardo!!! go die@@@@!!

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