FreezePark's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OneyPlays ANIMATED : GTA 5 with Mods]

Nothing here has changed or gotten better since your last cartoon.
Your posing is still pretty bad. I couldnt tell what was happening at the skydiving part at all. Your frame by frame is practically non-existent here, you still use alot of tweens. Your proportions are disgusting, the choices you made with the proportions of oney here made it difficult to see what was happening.

So idk man. I wanna see you make good cartoons but you keep making these gross looking eddsworld-ish style cartoons. I know lots of people who give you criticism but you haven't changed at all.

[Finding Dory]

fucking yes

[Shaggy-Doo! (2015)]

Pretty good art and jokes, but you need to work on your movement. Seriously, this looks like Aqua Teen Hunger Force the way it moves

[BPTV PILOT]

Coolprinter's review is everything i wanted to say, he fucking nailed it. This is better than any of your other stuff, especially compared to StuBoy and PivBoy. I'm really glad you improved there, I was really expecting this to be another bland "2 guys who live together and go on adventures" series by you, but thankfully it wasn't. But dude this is the third time you've tried that concept. I'd really suggest either trying something else or keeping this concept but thinking really outside of the box with it, put a twist on it or something. But thankfully, unlike your other shit, this thing actually made sense! I could watch this and actually get something out of it, that's improvement right there cool! Your humor is still something I'll never appreciate, but humor is subjective and the humor in this cartoon isnt haha funny fart LOL so i'll give you some credit for atleast trying with the jokes here. Your animation has gotten better over the past couple of months aswell, which is good. I actually really liked the posing and scenery in this cartoon, especially when they're trying to not kill the boss. The colors in this cartoon are pretty nice to look at too. Coolprinter already went on about this but yeah those character designs, i dunno man. Your character designs have never been anything special, and they still arent anything special! The boss looks ok but the designs for Berry, Pepper and Tootsie are actually the most generic thing ive seen from you besides the StuBoy and PivBoy designs. Give the characters different head shapes, body shapes, heights, weights, colors, or dont even make them human. Do whatever to the characters to make them look interesting in the slightest. While you're at it, start learning anatomy or something, i know its a cartoon but having hands and other body parts looking so sloppily drawn just bugs the fuck out of me. The voice acting was actually not that bad. Besides an animator you like to consider yourself a voice actor but i think this is the only time your voice acting has actually stood out. Everyone else did good too, Ricepirate is always a great voice actor no matter what he's in. The music in this cartoon was pretty good too. Thank jesus you aren't getting Ihugeny to do your music holy fuck what were you thinking getting him for the deadpool musical cartoon you made.

Overrall, i saw improvement in this for alot of departments but there's still a couple important things to be fixed. Good luck boy

ThePivotsXXD responds:

Lhugueny paid me for those haha. They were commissions. Thanks for the review dude! This series actually isn't about 2 guys living together. It starts out that way though. I have a lot of different things I haven't tried yet, and I'm excited to get those ideas out. Thanks again dude!

[The Ascension: A stick death maze]

this is pretty cool dude, sorry you have to stay under judgement for 5 days. i dont know how the hell that even happens

LevelUPAnimations responds:

Thank ya :) i know right lol

[Stick Skitz: Volume 3]

i could just copy and paste my same review for the last stick collab you guys did but nah, i wont be that type of person. let me just say that i liked chrisbasso's entry like last time, and, WOW i actually liked another entry besides his! Tylarius's entry actually looked nice! thats cool hey! but like last time, everything else was shit. none of the jokes made were funny, none of the other entries had good animation in the slightest, and of course, everything went on for way too long. the one by flippingburgers actually made me want to close out of the tab and watch something else, that one would just not fucking end. i'm suprised you thought it was a good idea to make a third collab after your first two were just flooded with harsh reviews. why do people even bother making collabs on newgrounds anymore, every collab nowadays is either a collab filled with bad animation and inside jokes or bad animation and shit that goes on for way too long. even though the collabs by people from New Wave are the bad animation and inside jokes i said, you can atleast see that they have fun doing them. and that's why people appreciate their collabs so much. all i got from this was "oh yeah let's do a third shitty collab cos its a trilogy hahahahahAHAH".

seriously guys, what honestly made you want to do another one? did anybody really want this?

i could go into further detail about how badly this collab was organized but i'm just disappointed to see how obvious it is. just rewatch the collab yourselves then you'll see how badly organized it is. have fun with whatever you guys do next i guess...

StaticSkull responds:

First off, thanks for your review.

Second, I only did this because it was fun, just like every other piece of work that I do, and everybody else that asked to join was glad to join.

[Roommates - Paper Splash]

i'm so glad your doing frame by frame now, and even better, it isnt shit frame by frame!!!! you need to get better at your posing though, i think that's one of your problems you've kept ever since your motion tweening days. also practice anatomy stop drawing hands like small circle blobs ya dope. the way everything moved in this cartoon looked really nice though, if there's something you've always done really well it's shape tweens, and it really shows here. my only other issue i have with this cartoon is that this made me realize how bad of a voice actor you are lol. the lines "alright! if i deafeat this, i'll get stronger, right?" and "i'm gonna go play video games" were said so casually when you could've said it with a little more excitement and enthusiasm.

also jonarock did good with his lip sync though the mouth was so small i was convinced that it was shrinking slowly and slowly

and azoko's new roommates intro is really cool too

[Life's a Zoo]

i like this cartoon!!!!!!!
i like the animation, poses looked a lil weird in the beginning (especially when kert is laying down on the couch) the backgrounds looked real nice, and the voice acting was definitley an improvement from your other cartoons, i thought cole's voice as the giraffe sounded a bit dull but the audio quality in your cartoons used to be fucking horrid so i'm glad its good now. i think my only complaint is the music, i can't tell if this show is supposed to be serious or intentionally ridiculous, so if its supposed to be serious then that music kinda ruins it for me idk

but hey mikey boy you get better and better with each cartoon, nice job bb

[15 Seconds]

hot damn

[Mad Jim]

the last cartoon i saw from you was from 2007
its been almost a decade and the only thing that has changed is that now your cartoons are HD

dude what even are you? i only see negative reviews on your stuff, on youtube and newgrounds, do you even read them? do you breathe? do you live?

koit responds:

If you truly believe that then so be it.

63 million views on youtube and 97k subscribers might disagree with you.